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  • in reply to: I want feedback #441050
    Rachel Atkins
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    I really love your work Laura, you have created a great sense of atmosphere with your high contrast and fading between light and dark. The eyebrows, beard and wrinkle lines are really effective, nicely done. The lighting and facial features are really interesting, perhaps a more dynamic pose, rather than directly side on, would add some extra wow factor. It’s really great drawing.

    in reply to: Sylvan #440793
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    I really love your background and the way the colours work with your portrait.

    in reply to: Still life, oil on paper, critiques welcome #440756
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    Lovely piece, I like how the pot edges recede into the darkness, creates great atmosphere. The corn or leaves seem to be close to the same value as the lemons, it could perhaps benefit from being a bit darker than the lemons, with less yellow, if you wanted them to recede a little and not complete so much with the lemons.
    I wish I could paint this well!!

     

    in reply to: Acrylic painting, 30 x 30 cm linen canvas #440743
    Rachel Atkins
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    I really like how you captured the realism of the ram, but maintained a clearly painterly style. It feels real, your values work well to create a sense of depth. Great stuff.

    in reply to: Free Student Video Critiques by NMA Instructors #437711
    Rachel Atkins
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    Hi, I’m working from a photograph, I’m not sure where I’m going wrong, it’s in acrylic, any feedback welcome. Thank you.

    in reply to: Free Student Video Critiques by NMA Instructors #432213
    Rachel Atkins
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    Hi, another couple of  attempts, the landscape needs work, the bottom section especially, just looking for any feedback that might help direction, thank you again for any help. Cheers

    in reply to: Free Student Video Critiques by NMA Instructors #432222
    Rachel Atkins
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    hi, last one from me, unfinished as I’m not sure how far to take it as I usually overwork these things to death, bottom needs work, but any tips would be so helpful. Thanks again, you guys are so generous to open this up to everyone. Cheers.

    in reply to: Free Student Video Critiques by NMA Instructors #432221
    Rachel Atkins
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    Hi, apologies if this comes  up twice, I have posted three images, happy to have feedback on any of them, thank you so much.

    in reply to: Free Student Video Critiques by NMA Instructors #432200
    Rachel Atkins
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    <span style=”-webkit-tap-highlight-color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);”>Hi, I’m a total amateur, any tips would be lovely. Thanks for the support.</span>

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