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hi there Josseline and Ramona,

I promise I’ll be back soon to answer, but I can’t now (very busy with my daily job)

Meanwhile, many thanks for your critiques and advices.

see ya soon

for Ramona: it’s only a short movie (love Tilda too); here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J2Zajvjm4LI

And, yes, you can do what you want with/over my drawing. 🙂

tks

[adrianomazzanti10]

yes. Tilda Swinton acting

[adrianomazzanti10]

wise words 🙂
as I promise, a portrait for your next critique. Ciao and stay safe.

[adrianomazzanti10]

many thanks, Joshua! And thanks to Chris

[adrianomazzanti10]

hi there Cassandra,

thanks for your words.

I guess you’re right: the white pastel produces an ugly result 🙂

but , as I said, I am self-taught and a beginner and – more- I am lazy, so I suppose I picked the first white “things” I had at hands and used it.

I have to learn how to use the materials and it was the first time I was using charcoal (alphacolor), so I hadn’t any idea how to to do an highlight on that sketchbook  toned paper.

But, you’re right.

I think I will post another one, a charcoal portrait, in which if I remember well, I used gouche to do the white: I’ll be glad to hear your opinion.

 

About the reason I am hesitant to do critique, other than I don’t think I can advice someone, there is that I am shy, too.

But you’re right again, so I will try to win my unwillingness and try to say something.

 

thanks again, Cassandra

[adrianomazzanti10]

ops, I have to apologize: I didn’t realize that Chris has criticized one of my sketchbook’s works. I’ve been so involved with my daily smart working for the past few days that I haven’t had the time to participate and check. So I hope that after posting this extra request, I won’t offend anyone. In this case, ignore my request; but if you have the time, I’ll be glad to have one and from the forum gang too. And I really want to thank Chris for his critique! Being myself a self-taught – apart the courses followed on NMA – it’s a precious resource. I’ll try to following your suggestions, Chris, and improve my drawing’s proportion and challenging myself on a more finished drawing on proper paper (it would be my first 🙂 )

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many thanks again for this gift to us. i don’t see some drawings i’ve tried to post yesterday, maybe my mistaken, so i’ll try again (sorry if they’ll be replicated). Some are from life others from photo references. Thanks again for this opportunity it is very precious for a me i never had one, i am self taught and only trying to learn through NMA and some little more online tut.

 

 

 

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i am joking. it’s always nice when you meet a (great) humble artist

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really?! craig mullins is asking for critique?

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