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  • August 20, 2020 at 10:59 pm in reply to: portrait in oil – please critique #680555
    Michael Benson
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    the left cheek does look odd, besides that it’s amazing!

    August 20, 2020 at 10:57 pm in reply to: Critique for an Art work on progress! 😁 #680554
    Michael Benson
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    this is amazing! makes me think of a renaissance painting of a comic book superhero based on a young Jesus.

    August 20, 2020 at 10:55 pm in reply to: Drawing of Patrick #680551
    Michael Benson
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    I think the neck is getting there, the neck and upper chest on the girl in dress was better.

    I like the hair and the facial features -esp. the lips. And the overall face.

    The eyes themselves would benefit from individual practise on drawing eyes: eg – https://www.facebook.com/matt.hall.16718

    August 20, 2020 at 2:14 am in reply to: Sketch of Female in Dress #679135
    Michael Benson
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    I think the strongest elements of this drawing are the facial features and the muscles.

    I love the upper chest and neck, very clearly defined but in a greyer, subtler style – I dig it.

    The hair could be stronger.  The overall face shape could be stronger and the bust and drapery.

    The bottom of the dress is a really good start though, very soft and vague. Which seems to work with this style.

    Yea imo spend more time on the hair, polishing the fingers and middle of the dress. Maybe polishing that cheek a bit.

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