[Jillian Phillips]

Hi!

What a super cool piece AND medium – good job!

I have had zero exposure to ceramic but one thing I noticed and would suggest is creating differences in the two stub places (are they even called stubs?) – there is a tiny difference now which is nice–but I think a variety in the sizes may help it be a little less predictable.

Does that make sense?

-Jillian

[Jillian Phillips]

Hi Flavio!

Nice work you posted!

One suggestion I would have is to spend a longer period doing your studies. If you get bored easily you could set timers and get up and move around in between (or work on multiple pieces at a time) but really take your time and squint in to see details that you may have missed in a quick 20 minute sketch.

 

[Jillian Phillips]

Holy smokes! This is incredible! Well done — I agree with the softening comment – the whites feel a bit too white in some areas and that might help soften the mood just a tad.

Good job!

[Jillian Phillips]

Hi!

I love looking at this! Her features are beautiful! Just one thought I had – soften the cheek bone edge a bit where it meets the hair and drops down – I’m sure it is a defining feature of her face but it feels a little harsh.

Really beautiful work!

[Jillian Phillips]

Hello,

I just saw the Instagram post that critiques are being offered here -thank you for the services offered and the help being extended!

oil on canvas

-Jillian 

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