Nice work! The clavicular portions of deltoid actually must transition into tendon much higher up than do the other portions. The reason for this is that they must accommodate pectoral major. This is something I see even professionals (pretty much everybody miss) but once you are sensitive to it, it is undeniable. Also the rear portions of deltoid should spiral over and connect lowest on the humerus.
Also try to indicate the cone like form that is created by biceps brachii as it points towards the radial (thumbside).
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