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March 20, 2020 at 11:23 pm #421973
Hey, I’m Leon from Austria. I went to a sculpting school and learned from Johanna Schwaiger who’s now teaching in NMA. She taught me so much and I’m really thankful for that! Now that she’s in LA I am happy to have all the NMA online courses to study from.
Here are some recent and also a few older works from me and I would love to get some critiques from you all.
The last two works I did were some Pin-ups which I used reference from the 40s-60s.
I also love to do portraits but mostly in BW because I’m not really good with colors yet, but thats the next step.
I mostly work digitally on my iPad and I know that working on paper would be better..
So thanks a lot,
LeonMarch 20, 2020 at 11:26 pm #421979March 20, 2020 at 11:31 pm #421980March 20, 2020 at 11:35 pm #421981March 20, 2020 at 11:39 pm #421994March 22, 2020 at 1:18 am #423793March 22, 2020 at 1:44 am #423811Leon, I’ve done a video critique of your work here: https://www.nma.art/forums/topic/free-student-video-critiques-by-joshua-jacobo/
March 23, 2020 at 9:56 am #425959How do you approach tone? do you break the subjects down into planes first or do you more just eyeball it? Great work here.
March 23, 2020 at 2:53 pm #426459Hi Leon
I just watched Joshua’s critique of your work – very informative!
I love your pinup piece! How do you go about developing the volumes of the figure?
March 23, 2020 at 10:52 pm #427484Hey Aiden,
thank you! In my opinion I’m not very good with tones and values yet and struggle with it a lot, but I guess I try to break it into planes first and then work it out as I go, so still pretty much eyeballing haha. But I watch a lot of tutorials and stuff to get better at it. Also the color theory course from NMA I’m watching at the moment really helps me.
March 24, 2020 at 12:46 am #427587Hey Josseline,
thank you! The pin-up is a copy of this piece but I tried to make her a bit curvier (I hope thats not offensive) so I got a few reference photos from NMA which I used and just tried to do the basic forms from the photo but add more volume on certain spots. I guess thats not a very good explanation but I don’t really know how else to describe it ^^
March 24, 2020 at 7:44 pm #429638Hey Leon,
Haha all good! Volume can be something tricky for me to get right, I guess it comes down to the initial construction and values. Thanks for sharing the reference and how you used others to adapt the image to what you wanted to express. I don’t mind at all! I prefer more curvaceous and/or more muscular women, i.e. deviations from the norm. Hope you’re keeping safe.
March 24, 2020 at 7:47 pm #429639p.s I saw you said to Aiden that you are doing the colour theory course here – you mean Bill Perkin’s one right? If so, that course is SO good. I came out knowing far more than I could and still can put into practice! haha. I have a sketchbook dedicated to the course. I will have to go through it again soon, and several times in the future, as the course is jam packed with information.
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