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  • April 24, 2020 at 5:03 am #488901
    Annie Survis
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    Hello again! This is my portrait drawing for the Russian Academic Drawing course. I’m pretty happy with it, though I’m sure there are a lot of things that I missed! I would love to hear ideas for how I can improve.

    Iliya Mirochnik, if you happen to read this, thanks so much for your course! I can’t believe how much I’ve learned already. I can already tell I am looking at objects differently now.

    April 24, 2020 at 3:23 pm #489728
    Joshua JacoboJoshua Jacobo
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    Well done!

    April 25, 2020 at 5:38 am #490719
    Annie Survis
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    Thank you,  Joshua!! Much appreciated.

    April 25, 2020 at 10:12 pm #491952
    garyartista
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    Good job!  The thing I notice is the sharp delineation of his left collar bone.  Needs more modeling there.   His right shoulder where it joins the arm seems too sharp an angle.  Below his left ear towards the should there is a bulge that does not look natural, perhaps too sharply delineated.  But really looks quite good overall.  Hope that helps.

    April 28, 2020 at 9:05 am #495899
    Annie Survis
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    Hey Gary! Thanks for the advice! I didn’t notice the bulge below his ear!

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