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[Dennis Postula]

[Andres Cabanos]

Hi buffanut. There is a nice consistency of light and dark patters going on throughout the figure. Ive chosen this aspect and thought it can be pushed a bit more to make it interesting. So what i did was i simply dropped the background with tone to define the rib cage. In doing so allowed me to pull highlight on the hair which helps push that idea of light and dark patters even more. Lastly Ive adjusted the size of the head which felt kinda small. Contrast of light and darks is just another tool to help bring clarity to your work. I hope this helps.

 

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