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  • March 26, 2020 at 4:29 pm #432522
    cindyzanella
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    March 26, 2020 at 6:27 pm #433332
    Josseline JeriaJosseline Jeria
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    Hi Cindy

    What a heartwarming painting! I love your colour palette, brushwork and the figure gestures. I think maybe separating the value of sky mass from the further ground plane would help to create more depth, as they read close in value such that they merge together. Real nice piece.

    Keep painting!

    March 28, 2020 at 11:54 am #436681
    ryokoseigo
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    I agree with the previous post, only I’d raise the saturation in the foreground more, and keep the background as is.  The background pulls off the foggy look well, and near the upper body looks great as a contrast to the brighter colors.  I think perhaps it goes into fog too abruptly though.

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