Models Bridgette and Serge from image library

[Aidan Andrews]

Probably the best two figures I’ve drawn to date. Personally I think I need to improve conciseness of plane change, but otherwise I’m not sure. Any advice would be great.

[Joshua Jacobo]

Can you post higher resolution images under better lighting? That will help with the critique.

[Aidan Andrews]

Yeah thanks for lettin me know, that was a screenshot of a screenshot from my Instagram. Sorry bout that.

[Josseline Jeria]

Hey Aiden

I can see you were making sure to think of the figure in basic shapes and forms, and trying to see the changes in light and shadow as the planes change – which is great. I think you captured the overall pose well. I think separating the light and shadow sides and making them more clear would help create more dimensionality. The right lower leg perhaps repositioned a bit? It looks like that is the supporting leg, but anatomically it doesn’t read quite right but I feel that’s nitpicking a bit, haha. Keep up the drawing! I sure need to. I slack a bit in favor of doing more painting, but drawing is the foundation! Learn, draw, and draw some more.

[Aidan Andrews]

I remember when i started my plan was to go super simple on the shadow shapes but i got carried away a bit. But yeah, I’ll definitely be working on tone more. Thanks!

[Josseline Jeria]

I have a similar problem. My shadow and light sides start to merge the more I develop the drawing and are less distinct from each other. More practice is all 🙂 No worries!

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