Jaden D. Blango Critique

[jadentastic]

I would love to have your advice on my work, thanks so much for the opportunity. This is a work in progress figure drawing.

[Josseline Jeria]

Hi Jade 🙂 Nice work. I like the pose and the overall composition. I can’t quite tell, but you may be working on a bit of a more grainy/textured paper? Your tone and shading overall reads a bit patchy, so it doesn’t help to support making a clear value statement in each area. If so, would be worthwhile doing your future drawings on much smoother paper, or even if you really like this particular image, re doing it. Could treat this as a study and use smoother paper to develop a more finished work. But I guess if you’re going for a more overall textured look this feedback may not be valid. Either way, great job.

[jadentastic]

I appreciate your feedback! I did feel the shading wasnt making the right connections so I appreciate your recommendations 🙂

[Josseline Jeria]

You’re welcome 🙂 I am working on improving my own tones and values. Here’s to further improvements and development!

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