Illustration critique

[Jave]

Can you please critique my work? Thank you!

[Josseline Jeria]

This is such a gorgeous illustration. You’ve captured such a sense of joy, freedom and unity. It makes me want to enter their world.

I think to enhance the drawing to make the perspective look more cohesive, I would make it look like you’re looking down onto the trees as well some what, or if you want the viewers eye to be closer to the figures and slightly below the trees, have then a bit more directed to the eye line. I love all the colours you have used, but I think it could be worthwhile doing some colour studies to make the overall colour scheme more cohesive. It’ll help bring the image more together, further emphasising the sense of unity with the characters.

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