Hello Leang,
You are on the right path. Your work has nice fluid lines which describe the head gesture pretty well. I would suggest watching for the axis line (vertical) of the head and align it accordingly to the structure of the tilt of the head. Breaking the head down into basic shapes, be it an egg, a cube, a cylinder, etc. will help you with construction of the head and add solidity to your work. Otherwise, keep up the great work.
Sincerely,
Roman
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