critique for my work, please

[loan.noda]

[Josseline Jeria]

Hi Loan,

Cool drawing! Curious, Is this Dorian from the image library here? If so, he’s one of my faves to draw – so expressive! I would say, I think to me the positioning and line up of eyes, nose and lips look a little bit off. Draw a straight line (on a tracing paper or procreate) through the eyes, top and under nose and through the top, mid and bottom lips to see how it all lines up. Could be where the features lie in relation to the head’s center of axis? could also do this on tracing paper/procreate to see. It seems like his head is tilted back and a bit to his right? Could be good to try turn the furthest right plane of the side of his face and the furthest top plane of the forehead to turn those forms more.

Overall great drawing 🙂 You should do a couple more of these, different poses. Play around with the value structure (your majpr and minor keys). i say because I like this so it be good to see more 🙂

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