Hello Yan, great job, good use of tone pattern : black/white/black
The overall structure ( proportions and placement) looks great, otherwise, the 2 values would show the errors on it.
I would suggest you keep your block-in tone as uniform as possible, at this stage we want to read only one flat black tone and one flat white tone ( tone of the paper), I personally do this by using the side of a long tip charcoal pencil doing strokes from top to bottom.
Remember to keep the drawing on this stage on two values, avoiding details, so when you feel your base is good already you can scale it easily from there adding values to a final piece.
Cheers ::)
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