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  • July 6, 2020 at 8:00 am #609173
    erased_1654656544
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    Graphite on watercolor paper. (Currently waiting for more drawing paper to be delivered). I lost the midline of the first male profile – the lips are too far forward in comparison to the brow) but yay for learning! any feedback is greatly appreciated.

    July 20, 2020 at 9:38 am #637082
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    Hi,

    I find it weird to critique, because I’m no expert myself, but these look very good. The line quality is good and (so far I can tell) the proportions as well. I don’t know if I can see it correctly but I believe the shadowshapes aren’t solidly greyed in. I mean that I can see spots in the shadows of lighter grey and white. The Bargue drawings really pop when these shapes are fully greyed in. It takes some work to get this evened out, but the feel of 3d really is more and the endresult will be (even) better.

    hope this helps, Bart

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