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  • October 17, 2020 at 2:56 am in reply to: charcoal portrait after Chris Legaspi, lesson 3 #833136
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    Hi Denny

    Great charcoal technique beautiful drawing

    Maybe The darker shadows just need tweaking  I personally find the triangle on the  neck distracting and the shadow behind the chin edge misleading poss just the digital image  very subtle delicate use of charcoal I started practicing drawing July 2020   and find this inspiring .

     

    Kind regards

    Tim

     

     

    October 17, 2020 at 2:42 am in reply to: Muscles of the Face Study #833121
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    More amazing drawing  inspiring

     

    Tim

    October 17, 2020 at 2:39 am in reply to: Shoulder Girdle Studies #833113
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    Incredibly detailed drawing this must really help with understanding form

    I can only imagine the amount of time and concentration needed to achieve these beautiful drawings

     

    Tim

    October 17, 2020 at 2:36 am in reply to: Portrait Study Russian Style #833112
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    Wow incredible drawing Jan are you on a course , as I would like to start portraits/figure ,it amazing what you have achieved with graphite .

     

    Kind Regards

     

    Tim

    October 17, 2020 at 2:06 am in reply to: Figure composition inspired by a Rilke poem – please critique. #833096
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    Hi Smudge Amazing  ,what materials did you use  really incredible tonal range very subtle lovely rhythms curves composition

    You have nailed it  it’s like you used falling light and  dust

     

    Beautiful

    I love Rilkes ” a bowl of Rose’s ”

     

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    October 17, 2020 at 1:51 am in reply to: Portrait in oil. #833065
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    Lovely painting  Francisco the highlighted left eye really draw me in. Its possibly the digital image ,but maybe the shadow on neck and left face could be little  softer ,also a little more bounced light under her chin .

    Maybe you could bring a little of the beautiful  dusky pink up into the head and background and some cools/blues  down into the blouse , really minor touches to what is a lovely portrait lots of expression and life

    Tim

    October 13, 2020 at 11:30 pm in reply to: Potrait sketches after some NMA lessons :any critique appreciated #828034
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    Hi Srsanyal

    I really like the second portrait more contrast I also really like the composition in the second it’s really arresting very good eyes  , subjectively I feel the composition in the first is not as strong and the tonal values  are less clear to read

     

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    October 13, 2020 at 11:20 pm in reply to: Watercolor potrait sketche after NMA lessons :any critique appreciated #828024
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    Hi Alva  interesting portrait I was wondering if the background could be lighter and warmer particularly the side not in shadow .

    Hope this helps

     

    Tim

     

     

     

    October 13, 2020 at 11:04 pm in reply to: Oil portrait of my wife nursing my son #828012
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    Yes it’s very subjective it’s a beautiful painting

     

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    October 10, 2020 at 12:40 am in reply to: Oil portrait of my wife nursing my son #802828
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    Hi Alon

    Your skill in painting is obviously good and I really admire your work , my critique would be the subject

    Subjectively the  mother seems to be turning away from the child causing a tension

    Which for me the beautiful colours and painting  can’t overcome some of it may be the tension in the neck .

     

    Kind regards

     

    Tim

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