[Romel Madray]

I am not an expert, but recently been studying composition but please take it as someone who is not an expert and in no means ill willed, I am just looking based on my efforts, so if I am incorrect it i not meant to be harsh.And so said feedback is welcomed.

1. The dark area on the left needs some clarification that it is a form, it is flat
2. The water needs some gradation to show less light as coming from the land
3. The focal point needs some defination of the form.
4. Lines wise the focal points point out of the painting
5. Some leaves on the tree and emphasis of the mountains in the background
6. Also is it a noon or sunset. The colors of the rocks make me make feel that it is sunset but the bright light suggests noon.
7. There is a clear almost abrupt value change in the water but not seeing the sun as the clouds are very yellow.

Regards

[Romel Madray]

Deep, Nice to see someone here. I really do need to get into the community. Started this month in effect to take art more seriously and progress. What’s your medium, preferences, favourite artists, paintings etc?

Still trying to figure that out, as I just like art stuff.

Kind regards from Trinidad.

BTW: Is Deep a reference to the character in the “Boys”

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