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    HolliHolli
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    Woman from anatomy

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    Carlos Perez
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    Hey Holii, the overall portrait convinces me, it looks “real”, I would add a bit more of the jaw at the right down part of her face though, structure-wise that’s the thing i’d change,  the hair looks well, the proportions seem correct, good stuff.

    value-wise I would suggest you add more value (get darker) on your block-in. A mid-dark value on the shadows would help the image to pop up and that tells us that the effect of light is happing there.

    Thanks for sharing your work ::)

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    Mark Watson
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    Looks like you are making progress!

    The biggest issue I see is the features aren’t lined up along the vertical axis. The mouth and chin are banana-ing (curving) off axis. See that? I would watch that in your next drawing. I always think the rule of thirds and the axis are the two biggest things for a front view like this.

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    Lewis BellLewis Bell
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    Great job! That core shadow on the nose is great! I agree with the previous comments in having a greater seperation between dark and light and utilising structural lines to arrange the feature early on will push you on – keep it up!

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