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April 3, 2020 at 7:08 am
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Hi Jaylene, I like how your using the soft side of the pencil to create the hair and the shadows of the face. It seems like your aware of how lines and tone can effect the quality of the drawing. However the drawing felt a bit flat mainly because its missing core shadows. Also the cast shadow of the nose is rolling over the face a bit too much, creating weird shapes on the face so I’ve slight shifted the light upward a bit more. I hope this helps 🙂
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