Well done! I love that you’re running lines over the form. That’s how I draw myself and I always love this technique. Some tips:
1. Think about which direction the lines wrap over the form. You can wrap those lines in any direction as long as they follow the form so think about what kind of direction you want to create compositionally. For example in this piece everything seems to suck up behind the ear or perhaps it is like flowing water or a waterfall. Intereresting but was that your intention. Look at Gustave Dore, Heinrich Kley, Joseph Clement Coll, Charles Dana Gibson for some ideas.
2. Maybe darken your reflected light under the chin a bit.
3. We need more of an underplane in shadow under the nose.
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