Nice job Timo. I like the gesture and sense of solidity in the form. The “spotlight” hatching is an interesting graphic device, too.
I feel you may have overstated the lighter values in the face. I can’t see your reference, but it looks to me as though most, if not all of the face should be in shadow, but some of the lighter values there look like they are bare paper, which is a value that appears in the lights. For an object of a given local colour, all of the shadow values should always be darker than all of the values in the lights. The reflected lights around the mouth and chin in particular look too bright to me, and it gives the impression that the jaw is slightly twisted towards the viewer.
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