Lessons learnt from Glenn Vilppu

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  • August 21, 2021 at 1:53 am #1690395
    Tanmay Shah
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    Charcoal on toned paperBrandiCharcoal on toned paper

    August 28, 2021 at 5:46 am #1711030
    Leo Di Fraia
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    Hi Tanmay.
    Nice overall proportions and good use of the toned paper.
    I’d like to suggest a clearer definition of the highlight shapes. They seem for the most part to end too abruptly and in many cases, they have offshoots that do not reflect the underlying form.

    August 28, 2021 at 5:47 am #1711031
    Tanmay Shah
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    Thanks for your views Leo Di Fraia.

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